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Concision Portfolio

Concision Portfolio

Q Here is an assignment that gives you the chance to try out your early fluff-cutting skills! Revise the following passage, avoiding wordiness and undesirable repetition. Rewrite it in the most concise way possible (hint, it is VERY wordy with tons of fluff), while being faithful and accurate with the minimal information the passage actually provides. Remember: If you can cut it, you must cut it!

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Probably you guys can see my name and knowing I am Chinese. Right, I borning in China and Shandong province. My hometown is a prefecture-level city that Weifang. I am only one child in my family. I own a club in my hometown before, and because of study abroad, I cannot care for that. I am a car guy, and I like to do some auto modifications in my leisure time. If thinking about academic writing assignments, I hate the " academic" parts and quotation parts.